Thanks to everyone for their comments on the first chapter. Work is moving along on the second part. Expected release date is sometime March 2009.
Check back here shortly for some previews. I'm intending to create a fairly regular release date for each chapter, I know I myself find it frustrating when a story i'm following is endlessly delayed so i'm gonna do my best to keep the releases monthly, it certainly won't be easy, wish me luck. :)